Chapter 10, Maci hates poker. Guys tried to teach her but she couldn't catch on. Next paragraph, Maci says she knows how to play poker a lil bit. Hmm confusing.
that was sooo good i loved it!!!! i cant wait to read more of your stories!!! right now i'm working on accidents happen and its shapping up to be just as good!!!!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I LOVE IT!!! I told you I'd read the Avenged stories when I was in the mood! And I was in the mood! WhooO!! I love the giant pink bunny. Truthfully though now, it reminded me of Playboy. Then again I'm obsessed with Playboy. Oh well. I love the little Brian-Chloe thing. It's so cute, he's going to have a hard time when she starts dating, haha. I'm glad Val turned out nice. It was sweet. I like that Cole's like Matt. Very cute. Cooper? Another kid's too much, in my opinion, but that's just me.
Not to sound all girlie but I am having a girlie moment and I REALLY hope I get a guy who thinks his pregnant significant other is sexy like Matt thinks of her..Anyways had to put that in there now back to the story :)
this is one of THE BEST stories i have read i absolutely love it and it was just AMAZING the list goes on and i love all of the stories you made they are reall good i can't wait till you write more if you chose to!!
This was an awesome story, and it had a really cute ending too! I love how Brian is Chloe's favorite xD especially after all the teasing and stuff from before. And the title reference at the end *nudgenudge* totally caught it ... we'll just ignore the fact you put it in bold. Haha. I enjoyed reading it. :)