You Can Stand Under My Umbrella - Comments

running from lions (100)

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emotional, original and cute-- a triple threat ;)
very well done ^^

January 23rd, 2010 at 12:27am

fawndling (100)

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Well done. :)
The background was a little busy; kind of distracting, and the ending was a little abrupt.
Other than that, it was very well structured and described. I really liked it!
Thanks so much for entering this in my contest!

January 21st, 2010 at 09:53pm

weed demon (100)

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Awesome story. (:
I liked it; I wish this could continue though. :D

January 21st, 2010 at 12:56am

justhannah; (100)

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REALLY GOOD!!!! lol XD

January 21st, 2010 at 12:54am

Faith Tenderheart; (100)

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I REALLY LIKED IT! =D

January 20th, 2010 at 11:50pm