Not Good Enough for the Truth in Cliche - Comments

*purr* I love this. You are, a fabulous writer and I just couldn't seem to look away from this screen until the story was finished. I am stunned beyond words.

holy crap
that's about all I can say
interpret that in a good way, I assure you that's how it's intended

Not only an amazing song, but an amazing story! The song you chose really made me feel the power of hatred he felt against her, and it made me feel the pleasure of seeing one you hate die alone. Your story related perfectly with the lyrics, and it worked out marvelously. Wonderful, truly!

I'm judging for the Pre-write contest and I like this revenge plot. It fit the lyrics pretty well and it was intense. Full of tension and suspense. Nice work!

Absolutely wonderful.
It's gruesome, it's violent, and it's absolutely not cliche.
You wrote exactly what I was looking for. You made the song and story fit perfectly.
The plot line is solid and easy to follow and the raw emotion is vivid. His anger really paints a picture.
I really loved how devoted he was to killing her, no matter what it took.
You're a very talented writer! Thanks so much for entering this in my contest!
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