Day in, Day out. - Comments

Yay, this one's different. Seemingly anyway.
I haven't been reading many Rydons recently and this one made me remember how much I love them!
I'll subscribe asap.

xx

Nanto kawaii, neko.

Brilliant description and vocabulary. :]

:) bb, I really liked this. I'd have to agree with the above comment, the beginning was incredible. I loved all the description and all the pain that both of them seemed to be feeling and how you portrayed it. I really enjoyed this. Is it going to be chaptered?

I found this really lovely and I liked it very much. The descriptions were amazing and the imagery was too. I liked you how you started it, you just dove right into it. I like that.
The concept was really nice too, it's sweet and sad at the same time.

"Brendon ran his hand down the boy’s slender body, over his protruding hipbones and back up to his ribs."

Like I said before, I enjoyed the opening bit. This description just stuck to me.

Amazingly written.

I like it. =]

Is there more? If so, I'd love to see it!

I really like the idea of this, and I thought it was good how they both knew what was happening between them. I thought the ending was a good twist, it let us into Ryan's life a bit more with that part added in, and the ending made me smile because even though Ryan and Brendon can both see the faults, at the end of the day it's both of them together.

It's well written, well done.

interesting. I'd like to see if this goes anywhere (: