Star-Crossed Lovers - Comments

As always, I like this story! and this update. seriusly, i think you write good and it's very describing with details and all. and details are good! you deserve more readers and comments on your work, but i think the reason why you haven't got so many is because of the lack of updates.

I found it very cute and kinda funny that bob,ray and mikey tried to beat the shit outta frank though. and the ending was good. i liked the sentence he’s just another person to show me how fucked up I am.

Waiting for next update :)

Aww. I like this it's good.

I like Mikey in this story. I can imagine him walking over to Frank and kick his ass for throwing his big brother's sugar treat. haha! but i feel kinda sad for Frank though. just because he has the needs to insult and hurt others in order to make himself feel better.
Update when you can :)

Haha, I think Gerard is kind of funny. Just the way he is and the way his mind works. But at least we know now that Frank does mean something to him, because he got the poor cigarette off his mind! And yes, Frank is being kinda rude to just walk away, but I do get him.

Update when you can! :)

Yay, update! :D seriously, I think you write oh so good. Really. I enjoy reading it, and the way you end the chapters makes me want more! Im looking forward to the next cotton candy chapter :) and thanks for the skittles.

I loooooooove this story so much :]
(you got lots of o's in "love", so you should feel special ^_^)
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Totally amazing!!!!! Can't wait for the next update :))
do it soon!!

-Eats Skittles- I like this chapter! I still wanna know who Tommy is dammit! Tell me! Oh, sorry! I got carried away... teehee :)

OMG! Now I wanna know who Tommy is!!! :(#)

Only TWO comments? :o holy shit, im surprised you haven't gotten more. I think this story is interesting, so im subsribing. oh yeah i am!

Aww I feel bad for gerard! Stop being a douchebag frank!!
Lol it's good though!!

Aww. It's so cute. I love how awkward Gerard is! :)