Story Of A Girl - Comments

  • MissAmerica

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    I read it...
    LMao.
    Well this is good the paint fight is hilaroussss....
    I really hope her n frankie
    get together
    cause i mean they would be great.
    N i hope she becomes n artist not a lawyer...
    August 1st, 2010 at 07:34am
  • brwneyedbeautyxx

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    update?(;
    May 9th, 2010 at 05:28am
  • SamSevenfold

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    i loveeeeeeeee this storyy :)
    Frank and 'Easter' are so cute
    I cant wait to see what happens :)
    March 31st, 2010 at 01:24am
  • ashley050494

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    This is a great story.
    It has a different plot than most Frank stories which is nice.
    Also, I love your writing style in general, it's sort of refreshing and humorous, serious and semi-realistic.
    It's also nice that there are few grammar and spelling mistakes; it flows smoother which makes me want to keep on reading.
    It's obvious you care about the quality of your writing and I hope you update this story soon because I can't wait to see what happens! :D
    February 24th, 2010 at 04:13am
  • ashley050494

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    This is a great story.
    It has a different plot than most Frank stories which is nice.
    Also, I love your writing style in general, it's sort of refreshing and humorous, serious and semi-realistic.
    It's also nice that there are few grammar and spelling mistakes; it flows smoother which makes me want to keep on reading.
    It's obvious you care about the quality of your writing and I hope you update this story soon because I can't wait to see what happens! :D
    February 24th, 2010 at 04:13am
  • brwneyedbeautyxx

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    in answer to your question, i still read :) keep posting, the story's great!
    February 16th, 2010 at 01:34am
  • AngelFake

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    haha paint fight! i know some people in my art class i'd love to throw paint at lol

    The Rev woulda been 29 today:(
    its really sad:(
    February 9th, 2010 at 10:16pm
  • figwmwrtbb

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    I read it! I just haven't commented lately cuz I'm always only allowed on for a few so yeah :/ sorry
    it would be so cool to have a paint fight in class *throws paint in mind at English teacher*
    can't wait for the next update Chica :D
    February 9th, 2010 at 06:50pm
  • ashleeinwonderland

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    to answer your question, yes. i read this story, and i adore the hell out of it (:
    February 9th, 2010 at 02:07pm
  • xTeddyBear_Massacre

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    Loved it! I can't wait for another update! <3333
    February 9th, 2010 at 01:50am
  • LumosMaximus

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    *claps*
    Loved it! And I still read it..Damn, now I wanna get into a paint fight!!
    February 8th, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • Pencey Prep

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    I still read this.
    I love it.
    that was a great chapter too.
    February 8th, 2010 at 09:15pm
  • salander.

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    I've never had a paint fight.
    But now I really want to.
    In all white clothes and in a white room with a white floor.
    As long as it's not oil paint I think I'd be okay.

    Anyways, I love where this story is heading!
    And I read it!
    February 8th, 2010 at 04:04pm
  • TashaInsanity

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    Haha he makes her blush :)
    February 4th, 2010 at 01:05pm
  • salander.

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    My goodness!
    This just keeps getting cuter and cuter!
    I love it.
    February 3rd, 2010 at 03:23pm
  • xTeddyBear_Massacre

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    Loved it, it was adorable! =]
    I want to meet someone who gives me that effect. I have hope. =D
    February 3rd, 2010 at 05:55am
  • alive again;

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    I fucking love this story, it's so cute haha.
    Update soon!
    <3
    February 3rd, 2010 at 03:59am
  • TashaInsanity

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    'Aww that really was cute! like every two seconds I was like "Aww!' or 'thats so cute!' haha brilliant chapter! (: still my favorite story
    February 2nd, 2010 at 09:27am
  • xTeddyBear_Massacre

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    oasjoiashdfgoh!!!!
    So freaking cute! But I can totally see someone busting in and ruining the moment... T.T

    Omg, and I know! The Used is awesome! I have Pretty Handsome Awkward as my ringtone and my favorites are "Cut Up Angels", "I've Caught Fire", "Paralyzed", "Taste of Ink", and "Let it Bleed"... probably... maybe... sure. =]

    But I had been obsessed with Aerosmith last week, I couldn't get enough of them... "Honkin on Bobo" is a really good CD...

    Anyway... [/spam]

    Wonderful update! I missed you soo much!
    And, curious, could you recommend any other really good Fan Fics of My Chemical Romance, The Used, or Taking Back Sunday?
    February 2nd, 2010 at 05:49am
  • Pencey Prep

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    soooooo cute!!
    February 2nd, 2010 at 01:35am