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  • ikinar

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    argh! this story is amazing!!
    i really loved it, my eyes were welling up at the end cause i imagined him to be dead, just the way you wrote '"3", and then i dont hear anything' at the end it automaticaly made me think that he never woke up or something.
    but really just beautiful, its in my top 5 of one shots that ive read.
    i would love it if you wrote another chapter just saying how you thought things ended, i love finding out how the author wants it to end but, its your choice so if you dont write another chapter please leave a comment on my profile saying how you want thing to end!! :D :D :D

    thanks for writing this!
    December 6th, 2008 at 12:48pm
  • Freaka.

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    CONTINUE DAMMIT! This is great!!! :)
    January 21st, 2008 at 07:20pm
  • bodysnatcherr.

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    Wow. I love it. You shall defiently continue.

    xoxo
    s.
    January 1st, 2008 at 07:59am
  • w00t?

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    You.. can't... Do... THIS!
    I just need someone to tell me the ending, 'cause this is going to occupie my mind for the next week Cry

    Please write a second chapter.
    Pwett pleaaase, because this was a lovely and amazing story. :hug:
    December 12th, 2007 at 03:39pm
  • death_pixie

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    I really liked that.

    I think it is great how you are getting people to think about the ending rather having it shoved down their throat for them.

    Happy endings can get real old too. You can only get that kinda perfection in stories and it's boring.

    We need more cliff-hangers and tragedies in Frerard story world, people! lol

    Scarlett.

    xoxox.
    November 19th, 2007 at 04:26am
  • Alice Verney

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    poor gee
    November 7th, 2007 at 09:48am
  • lonelydays17

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    tonje!
    finish.
    please
    *is crying*
    November 4th, 2007 at 06:48am
  • queenbluerulz

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    you should makethis into astory!! It's really goood!
    October 25th, 2007 at 01:18pm
  • karenlee

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    You want to know what i think?? i think you are an amazing writer! You should keep writing this story. Not for us but for yourself. You need to finish this! i write poems sopmetimes they frighten me when the words come out. i know i have to finish them, let them out. For yourself finish this story!!!!
    Talk to me.
    October 21st, 2007 at 01:23am
  • ChemicalsAndRomance

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    I love it.
    Beautiful, emotional, it's brilliant.
    October 18th, 2007 at 07:13pm
  • Rape

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    Love it, love it, love it ^^
    Continue, continue, continue!
    Pleaseee?
    October 18th, 2007 at 02:14am
  • xAwSugarx

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    aw that was sad but cute at the same time

    i like how frank gave him some hope =]

    the ending in my head is happy
    gerard wakes up to frank and mikey and frank and gerard do the dew and live happily fucking ever =D

    wonderful story, well-written. i think you should continue =]

    -a
    October 16th, 2007 at 12:37pm
  • RyRo

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    CON. TIN. UE.

    like, yeah. <3333
    October 16th, 2007 at 10:24am
  • armageddon

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    Awwwww Cry Cry
    Poor everyone!
    I think you should decide if you want to continue or not..
    But it was so beautiful! Cry
    October 16th, 2007 at 01:54am
  • FrancyPansy

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    awesome awesome awesome!!
    continue asap!! i wanna know if gee is arlight! oh he better is cuz otherwise.. :( poor frankieboy!

    great one shot.. wait it wont be a one shot anymore if you continue.. haha anyway !

    updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    xxx
    October 16th, 2007 at 12:19am
  • E. Van Dahl

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    that was realy sweet.
    i really liked it.
    i think you should leave it as is.
    its good for people to use their imagination every once in a while!
    October 15th, 2007 at 10:16am
  • aye kayla

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    this is a reallyy good story. i loved it. :]
    October 15th, 2007 at 09:54am
  • RIOT!

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    please continue?
    pweese?
    October 15th, 2007 at 09:17am
  • rikey

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    I love this !

    Leave it there, or write a short summary on the aftermath of the surgery? Well, I love the way it is, and this story is entirely up to you, since you are the author after all. :]

    Anyway, I love it and I give you two thumbs up. Very well written and kept me interested throughout the whole page. ;]

    &&Ríkey
    October 15th, 2007 at 08:28am
  • BlackoutSpark

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    more. please. =]
    you could end it like that, and it would be a good ending, but you won't.
    cos thats just not fair.
    =]
    x
    October 15th, 2007 at 04:02am