Behind Enemy Lines - Comments

  • kel17

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    Great story! keep writing!
    April 30th, 2013 at 07:54am
  • Katie482110

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    I LOVE DEREK STEPAN! Please post more :)
    June 22nd, 2012 at 06:43pm
  • lovexpink

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    ahhhh i seriously LOVEEEE derek stepan! please please please continue this story! im hooked!
    April 30th, 2012 at 06:50am
  • sister of indecision

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    This story is fantastic!
    I just started reading it, but I am OBSESSED.
    Please post soon, or i'll die -__-

    Cathy C:
    February 6th, 2012 at 11:52pm
  • I Love T-Hallzy

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    So I'm watching the world juniors and randomly decided to search for a story with Canadian/American boys in it and I found it for sure. Love this story!!!!
    December 27th, 2011 at 05:43am
  • beresh!15

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    please please please update this story is awesome
    December 30th, 2010 at 05:00am
  • stephan1eee

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    i'm only bummed that i just found this story. i'm so glad stepan is finally in the story since he was definitely one of my favorite on the world junior team but can you put cam fowler in it too??

    i need more chapters! =]
    March 18th, 2010 at 06:06am
  • trigger;bang

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    the zoo? really? alyssa...make up better excuses, please.
    luke clearly knows something is up, I just know shit is about to hit the fan.
    it's pretty much inevitable at this point. I cannot believe they went to a team USA game...
    NOT GOOD. Even though I do really enjoy when they hang out haha. Cousin Brayden is going to be so pissed if he finds out about this, which I'm sure he will!

    However, I really enjoyed the locker room part though.
    Team Vagina ftw? I think so.
    But Phoebe CANNOT switch up steps for Kristo.
    NO, I do not support this! HELLO, ginger love?
    I don't care how beautiful this boys eyes are, Danny's hair is something one dreams of.
    (yeah I'm a tool)

    ANYWAYS, please update again soon my loves!
    Can't wait for more!!!!!
    okaybyeloveyouguysssss<3333333;
    January 20th, 2010 at 06:20am
  • c is for carly.

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    the usa boys locker room, team vagina, and the zoo...
    how much better does it get than that?
    i'm curious as to why luke is calling. hmm.
    love this so much. please more soon!
    January 20th, 2010 at 05:04am
  • smooey89

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    hah i loved this chapter! it made me laugh pretty hard
    I love zucker and stepan.
    These girls in the story are awesome.
    please update soon!
    January 20th, 2010 at 04:28am
  • Flower29

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    this chapter was awesome! the zoo was great...so random. at least they kept up with it and she told luke they were there. I can't wait to read the rest and see why Luke called in the first place. Team USA seems like a fun bunch of guys :)
    January 19th, 2010 at 10:14pm
  • There She Goes.

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    love it (:
    ahaha. this was super funny and im still laughing :D
    the zoo? thats a very good excuse.
    can't wait for the next update :)
    January 19th, 2010 at 06:46pm
  • Jessica;

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    Ahhhh, Captain Stepan.
    You described his eyes perfectly...they're sooooo beautiful.
    Uhh, the zoo?
    That's a...good one?
    I too wonder why Luke is calling.
    Loooove this.
    More soon. <3
    January 19th, 2010 at 05:33pm
  • Miss Goldy Gopher

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    ahhh, locker room with team usa.
    derek stepan and zucks.
    not fairrrrrrrrr.
    ya'll are doing great!
    January 19th, 2010 at 03:44pm
  • Kitty ;

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    Yay new chapter, I was so happy when I saw the update. Great chapter, Derek Stepan does have pretty eyes :3 awww I felt bad for Kristo and how Phoebe was ignoring him for his captain.
    And LOL the zoo
    Anyway great chapter and I can't wait to read the rest ^_^
    January 19th, 2010 at 01:29pm
  • trashy cigarettes

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    Team Vagina! haha
    loved it.
    January 19th, 2010 at 07:36am
  • MissLis

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    uhhhhhh somebody's in trouble *laughs*
    but it's so cool! I love it :D I've been sitting here laughing my butt off the whole chapter, because it's so darned funny "Yup, we're going to hell..." :D:D:D
    as a non-Canadian and non-American reader and bystander I have to say I have difficulties picking a favored team though... I think I'll just go with somebody else, like Sweden or something :)

    looking forward to the update :)
    January 19th, 2010 at 07:35am
  • c is for carly.

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    ((: usa boy actionnn.
    those boys definitely seem like a good time.
    i can't wait for more of this. update soon?
    January 18th, 2010 at 06:46am
  • Kitty ;

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    I'm really really liking this story and I'm seriously hooked :D
    Please please update soon ^-^
    January 17th, 2010 at 10:27pm
  • Flower29

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    i love this so far...can't wait to see what happens when brayden finds out. I'm a team USA fan all the way, but I'm glad that you have both USA and Canada in the story...theres always room for guilty pleasures haha :)
    January 17th, 2010 at 07:13pm