A Story For Erika's Day - Comments

this was just...
oh goodness...
I'm sad now, but a good sad.

that is beautiful, and has put me on verge of tears.....
so sad, and beautiful, is a strange combination, yet it works.

That was absolutely beautiful and amazing. It made me cry. That's how a real dad should act. I LOVED it.

My goodness. That was beautiful. I'm a big fan of stories and storytelling. The emotions there were very real, and the story was very touching. It's... it's lovely.

Bonnie, that was so amazing. I want to cry. 3:
I knew, you made it just so OBVIOUS, that the story was about him. XD I dunno how you did it.
You also have a typo somewhere in there XP Go fix it.
I remember what it is, too. It's thawho. I think you were going to type "that" but put "who" midword and yeah. XD
That story was so beautiful. It really reached out to me, as well, because the point of life is something I'm struggling with currently. HOW ARE YOU SO AMAZING THAT YOU HELP FIX MY PROBLEMS WITHOUT KNOWING??? -pouts- You're insane Apple. AMAZING story. Love you a ton!!
<3 Mango.

That was absoutly bueatiful. I really liked it. *tears up* :') *sniffle*.