The Cradle. - Comments

Moose!!!!!!!!!!! Is he dead? Oh so sad :( But that was an awesome chapter, best one yet. :D Can't wait for the next update. Don't doubt yourself, this story is very entertaining to read :)

all of the different weapons remind me of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles XD

First of all let me say how much I fucking love this story! Its brilliant! Secondly the battle scene in this chapter was really cool, but I felt sorry for Jimmy and Moose. =( Hopefully the Rev's going to be okay.
cant wait for more
xXx

I like how you did a bunch of differnt POVs :D
Poor Abby, she was so close to getting saved :(
Update soon!!

please update soon :D

Nooooooo!!! why'd he have to kill moose??? gahhhh friggin update soon woman! i want to know what m does to syn!

Oli must dieee~ >=[

KILL OLI!!!!
i knew there was a reason i didn't like him as much as the others, before this story :D

pweeze update soon :)

You go Matt..save your girl.
Great update.

Ah really good :) Caught a misspell error "the hate bubbled in my(me) like tar..." , "blood d(r)ipped from my mouth..". and this one "his lips coated in the (s)claret liquid". I feel so bad for Abby she doesn't deserve what Syn's doing to her. Matt save her now! Die Oli~ Looking forward to the next update!

plz update sooonnn!!!! this story is incredible!

Go, Matt! Go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <-- That's all I gotta say :D
Update soon please!

i just read this story and i love it..i hope matt gets there in time to save abby.

:D action! yay! lol *cough* ummmmm if you need any other awesome characters.....like a crazy redhead who will help out, I'll be happy to assist.xD as Jacoby's bitch, of course. lmao jkjk <3 this story!!!

Please update soon!!! I MUST know what happens next :D

OH
MY
GOD
Pleaseeeee update again SOOON !!!
I am actually hooked on this story =D can not wait for the next chapter x

:(
I hope they find her soon!!!!
And I also hope you update again :D

So, I really like this story so far. The only thing I would say is watch where you put your 'I's because I noticed a lot of times that it would be in place of 'He's. Oh and the idea of another house, I would suggest making a female house. I feel that female vampires are a lot more scary. Like a woman scorned times a million. All in all great story. *subscribes*

great update!
Although Oli is the 'bad guy' his plan to take over Dani is interesting... some part of me wants him to succeed. I don't know why, but I think there is more to Oli's reason for destroying Dani.
But I want Abby and Syn to get back together.
I really hate Syn's character in this story, some should just kill him already.