Forgetting Neverland - Comments

  • What a sadistic peice. I really love it, especially since it was written for school. As with all stories, there are grammatical and spelling errors. It's easy to look over these and see Forgetting Neverland as a wonderful one-chapter story.

    I suggest you make a layout, to display the work perfectly.

    5 stars !!
    January 29th, 2010 at 10:40am