Foreverland - Comments

I remember reading this! I'm so glad I found it again, are you going to update soon?

cute cute cute!

When you reach for the stars, whether you get one or not. You always come falling back down

that was my favorite line, I can't wait for more :D

i love this, it's going to be so amazing! Update please! and i love hayden, he's so cute :D
totally subbing!

I like it!!
It's good so far

I think this is going to turn into an amazing story.
I like it :)
if i have anything to say badly about it, is that, the font is very small and very light, so it was kind of a struggle to read.
but other than that, keep writing.