Dark Beauty - Comments

Hi! I'm also reading that series by Christine Feehan, so when I saw this story, I know this is gonna be great! :D And guess what? I was right. I liked this story and hope you would update often... :))))))

LOVE STORY!!! =D
plz update as soon as you can thx!!! =D
u rock! =D

haha wow...Seth sounds like the way my brothers would be with my boyfriend when I get one lol...babies on board! IDK I just had to say that
well awesome update, can't wait for the next one! :D

holy crocodile I was not expecting that!! I so can't wait for the fresh chapters!

ok i just read chapter 15
I LOVE IT
It as a weird sense of hummer(ummm..... i dont mean the car- ummm...... i dont know how to sell humer?(i really suck at spelling))
ok yeah and thx for making me feel so welcome =D

Welcome angel2rock! lol...two more people commenting besides me, this is coolio man! lol

as for the chapter..I have a weird feeling about what they're going to do...IDK why, but I do...and I can't wait to see what it is!

I love this story i have only read the first 14 chapters but i think that it is very very good- please keep writing! =D

Welcome to the story Painfully.Obvious! lol...for a minute there I thought I was the only one on this entire site who would comment on this ;) lol
and great update...I loved Julian was described as "charming" haha..but good lecture with the bros lol...Andreas really told them!
can't wait for the next update

“Come to me,” A voice called from behind me. I could feel a command in it. I turned to see a man. He put on the pretense of being beautiful, but I could almost see where his face was gaunt and his hands stained with blood.

“No,” I told him simply. I didn’t know who he was, but I knew he was bad news. I started walking again, away from the beast.

“Come to me beautiful one,” the thing called again. I could hear a little bit of annoyance inching into his voice. “You cannot resist me.”

I laughed at that. “Wouldn’t you like that buddy. I believe I already told you no.” I started walking again, but he came up behind me faster than should have been possible.

I laughed when I read that.

Still laughing actually. Good one!

loved the chapter of course, can't wait till Andreas meets her family...that will be interesting...just so you know, I've gone hiatus on my stories, I'm still signing in and talking to ppl, but I'm not really updating anything for a while

coolie Desari and Julian helping with the wedding awesome! can't wait for the next part

okay first of all...ppl don't know good stories if it just jumps up and bites them on the leg..second, can't wait for the meeting between Layla and Desari and Julian...does Ms. Feehan have something up her sleeve as well? I can't wait for the next update EIK! lol

aww a wedding so sweet XD

great update as usual...and thanks for the shout out...I will continue to comment as long as this story is up haha *I know how it feels to not get any feeback for your hardwork* but that was such a Carpathian male to just force the bonding *sigh* can't they understand the virtue known as patience, even slightly? oh well, can't wait for more :D

two chapters awesome! lol...and they were both really good chapters :D can't wait for the next one *and I'll be waiting patiently ;)*

another great chapter...I think she's starting to crack a little, but that could just be me as well...another update soon maybah? can't wait for it! :D

nicely played Andreas!! lol that's a way to get the woman you want, and go Layla for remaining so independent...this is awesome, can't wait for more! :D

trust a carpathian male to be so demanding and so frustrated when something doesn't go his way. lol. loved the update can't wait for more:D

LOVE IT!!! :D so can't wait to read more of it haha...the dark series is flippin sweet!!