August 22nd, 2010 at 09:42pm
Ah! I'm absolutely in love with this story, not gonna lie! It sounded like something straight out of a fantasy novel. Surprisingly, the part I loved the most was when she was falling. A very strong ending that leaves a lot of questions open. Great job!
Good luck in the contest :)
I loved the rhetorical questions, it really added to the piece!
I think this was a brilliant idea, and the way it was written was brilliant too!