February 7th, 2010 at 06:37am
This was brilliantly written. I like the writing style--the way you've told the story.
It's sad, and I love/hate the fact that it is a sad ending.
I kind of wish that she had given it to him, yelled at him and called him out on their shallow relationship, because it's so depressing that she's just a rebound.
Love this insanely.
<3
it was meant to be a series, but once I read over it, I decided that it was better as a one-shot and that my very unreliable creativity wouldn't have been able to keep it flowing.