Violate. - Comments

This might be the most intimidating story to me. I really did not want to click on the chapter link just because I was afraid of what I would be reading. To be honest I read the title as volatile., not violate. but now that i'm here I might as well read it. The layout is really blah though, not bad it just intimidates me more but yeah.

I was surprised how much anger and spite you could mold into fifty words. I'm going to assume this character is a girl but how she would rather die than remember him, and remember his face, I feel the feeling is just so strong and you captured it so well. Fifty words of pure emotion, even if the story itself is not so.

Wow.
That was perfect...it was so short but somehow in just that many words, you managed to express it perfectly.
I don't know what else to say *speechless*

This made me shiver.

I don't really know what to say...
In very few words you managed so make me speechless.

Chilling. Beautifully written.

that was amazing.
your writing expressed the creepy, gross aftertaste without going into detail.
even in that little paragraph, you managed to explain all you needed to.
basically perfect. wow.

wow, this was wonderfully written, even if it is dealing with a horrific subject

i think i should og read more of yuor stuff now

Flawless execution. Your cadence really expresses the uncomfortable, crawly feeling the narrator is experiencing, and the italics give a good look into (her?) inner state.

for a contest.
50 words.

Rape.

xoxox
-Dru