Airplane. - Comments

Oneshot For a Oneshot

It was a really, really sweet story. (:
In the beginning I was wondering what kind of relationship it was, which was clever; I like how it wasn't blank and white from the beginning.
It seemed very real to me, which made it that much more appealing.
You're a great writer.

Oh wow.
That was beautiful.
It made me smile and my heart also fluttered for a second there.
You're a really great writer and I think I'll have to read more of your stuff sometime.
I really liked it. I really really did.

Oh, that was so cute my heart fluttered. I'm really glad I read this because it made my night. It was extremely cute and simple.

That was so pretty That was something I guess I really needed, but didn't notice. It was refreshing, sweet, and touching. A lot of emotion was fit into those few words.

Simply Adorable.

One Shot for One Shot

Right in the beginning you had me wondering what the relationship between the two of them was. Father, daughter, husband, uncle, I have no clue.

Everything in your one-shot is just so sweet...

Excuse me, but AWWWW. That's so...adorable! Everything! I loved how you described the part where the girl tried looking away but he was all 'Look at me!'

I loved it. Loved it, loved it, loved it. It's the kind of one-shot that would make you turn into a puddle. :D

That really was beautiful.

“Look at me.” His voice was soft, quiet, encouraging. I looked up slowly, my dark eyes meeting his ice blue ones. They were warm now, searching my face. I stayed silent through his searching, watching his eyes as they darted over my face.
That was my personal favorite part. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.

I loved it.