Rewind to the Memories - Comments

  • Fangs Up.

    Fangs Up. (100)

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    This was really good, I loved it :D

    I really liked the first few lines especially But lately, they’ve been reminding me of you. Constantly. It was just sweet.

    stealing pencils and scraps of paper to write you a note that you’ll never read. Awesome. I also really liked this line. It just described how she feels and they things she does.

    I really liked the whole letter idea, it fitted in well. I would of liked to see a layout but it's cool that there wasn't.
    Overall this was really good!
    July 19th, 2010 at 02:58pm
  • PinkRabbit

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    i like it:D makes me think life isn't as great as we think and rather dismal that we can start out with a lot and end up with nothing, well done :)
    June 19th, 2010 at 07:05pm
  • DaniGates

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    Yes yes. Very interesting.
    I liked it.
    March 11th, 2010 at 01:27am
  • D. Dixon

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    I really like it. :) I admit, I haven't read the other story, but this story could certainly get away with just being a one-shot. Great job!
    February 16th, 2010 at 12:35am