Wow, I'm at a loss of words. You've captured all the emotions, I actually felt with the character. I loved how you portrayed the reality and the struggle. Thumbs up!
I liked your story very much. Your writing skills are phenomenal which is something I admire because most people on this site don't know how to use proper English. Thanks for the great story.
Wow, this story is really good. I love how you designate each chapter an emotion, and then futhermore put a certain color to that emotion. It's totally brilliant and very original. It left me wondering what would happen at the end, so now I'm very curious. I subscribed and can't wait for more. =)