You Can't Touch My Brother - Comments

Hmmm, Neverland. :)
This was pretty awesome, I'm not gonna lie.

i loved this. it was pretty freaking amazing.
i liked how it was all childish and then it became all 'hot and bothered' and whatnot.

I must admit, this made me giggle the entire way through.
And then the end, well, although it's a Waycest I wasn't expecting that.
Nope, not at all.
And, as I've asked tons of other people, WHY CAN'T THERE BE AT LEAST ONE PICTURE OF GERARD WAY IN TIGHTS?!

Also, I've noticed that 3/4 of all Waycests are named "You Can't Touch My Brother".
Fitting.

All in all, I really liked it!

I liked it. I love how its so childishh!!! :) This is lovely. Maybe possibly do what you want with this story. It's good either wayy!!

This makes me giggle.