Infinite - Comments

This has such strong emotions, it's lovely. There's nothing I can pick on, as this story is really perfect the way it is. It almost reminds me of a Love Gives Me Hope story. Plus, it's not overly smutty or anything of the sort, just sweet and almost tender. I love it.

This was really nice :)

Definitely a different take on a situation. I loved the descriptions of the relationship. I have no critism nor do I have any notes for you to improve on. I think it was a wonderfully written piece. Although there was no dialogue, I actually enjoyed it more without it.

He kisses me gently, and in that moment, I swear we're infinite.
- Definitely my favourite line. It's amazing :)