Dead, Like A Candle You Burned Out - Comments

  • lizziemcgenius

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    i know it's been a while since anyone has commented on this, but whatever.

    this was very well written, and i loved it. except for the whole 'Alex dying because of a fire at a bar that he went to because Jack was ignoring him' thing. but besides that, i loved it.

    i hate you because you made me cry.

    oh and the whole 'Jack killing himself because Alex is dead and he wants to be with him forever' thing is cute. sad but cute. but i still hate you.
    August 12th, 2010 at 09:12am
  • CarynPikachau

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    hahaha i over exagarate lol
    but it was mocing i must admit
    July 14th, 2010 at 05:47pm
  • CarynPikachau

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    ;( hmmmm, mm WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    ITS SO -hic-SO SAD! -hic- poor Alex and Jack-hic-
    poor Ky-hic-Kyle! i hope he gets on well with Caleb and wahhhhh
    this is such a good story!! -hic- *teary eyes* this was amazing!! X)
    July 14th, 2010 at 05:46pm
  • My Chemical Tardis

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    Before I read this, I was smiling, now my eyes are filled with tears! ;(
    It's so sad :( but beautiful written!
    March 21st, 2010 at 09:28pm
  • i more than mean it.

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    I cried.. It was a really good story though, I loved it(:
    March 11th, 2010 at 03:10am
  • Dash Flintceschi

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    Loved this!!Cried even more than i would have cause i was listening to too much on repeat while i read it
    March 9th, 2010 at 11:41pm
  • theused.

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    i cried when you mentioned everyone running to find him dead.
    good story, though.
    February 27th, 2010 at 09:35am
  • UnFlappaBelle

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    Little heart is broken :(
    February 26th, 2010 at 06:26pm
  • Macy Emalia

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    AHHH! D: jack commited suicide!?
    Poor jackee.
    I like your style!
    February 25th, 2010 at 10:47pm
  • Shiver.

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    :'( *sob*
    That was really good, if really sad.
    February 24th, 2010 at 08:55pm
  • LottieNightmare

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    Oh my!
    This was so so so so good yet so so so so sad!
    I love it!
    Poor Jack and Alex and a crying Kyle!
    You wrote this all so well, it's amazing!!
    Great job!!
    February 24th, 2010 at 08:00pm
  • HurricaneTaylor

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    i dont usually cry when i read stories buuut this made me cry :(

    good story though :)
    February 24th, 2010 at 06:51pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Jeez, that brought tears to my eyes.
    I cried.
    Dammit.
    I loved that!!
    Poor all three of them!! Even though Kyle probably got Caleb or someone you mention...
    February 24th, 2010 at 06:50pm
  • amberisariot

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    OMG :'( poor Jack. Poor Alex too. and Kyle >..<

    aww, I love it though :D
    February 24th, 2010 at 06:48pm