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octoberlover_1014 (100)

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OMG...I LOVE HOW YOU MADE HER HAVE A BABY....PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE...I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY

June 10th, 2010 at 11:28pm

octoberlover_1014 (100)

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please please write more...i love this story...i just wish u had pictures for the characters=]
please write more

April 30th, 2010 at 11:03pm

Hope. (100)

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Thankyou RAVEN (:
Write more ?

April 22nd, 2010 at 10:00pm

Hope. (100)

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Awwww, Poor Lindsey <3
She must love Jeremy.
Write more, again :)

April 19th, 2010 at 10:18pm

Hope. (100)

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Stories - funny 'A BEAR! ' Blonde moments <R.I.P>
next chapter - OMG, Poor Carol/Lindsey.
write more ?

April 19th, 2010 at 09:51pm

Hope. (100)

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adrenaline did shoot through my veins
i was like jumping up and down
poor Jeremy :'(

April 13th, 2010 at 10:49pm

L___ (100)

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Noooooooooo! why did he leave goddammit! no, don't answer that, i know why of course, but still! now he can just go and rape/kill other girls in other cities and aargh!! :/

April 7th, 2010 at 10:23pm

PinkRabbit (150)

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wow! this is amazing
i love it :)

April 7th, 2010 at 08:47pm

L___ (100)

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yes, wow, i really thought that mr. robin would kill them or something..
update soon!

April 7th, 2010 at 05:13pm

Hope. (100)

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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, Poor aaron, Jeremy and so on.
Please write more?

March 29th, 2010 at 04:17pm

Hope. (100)

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Maggie again *scowls*
Please write more :)

March 29th, 2010 at 01:16pm

Hope. (100)

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A-M-A-Z-I-N-G :)
Maggie *scowls*
Grr, it's only been a month !!!!
please write more

March 25th, 2010 at 05:54pm

Hope. (100)

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:)
i love it

March 19th, 2010 at 06:09pm

Hope. (100)

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Chapter 9 made me cry :')
but i was smiling
keep writing :)

March 18th, 2010 at 06:57pm

Timid Tristian (100)

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its so sad but so good

March 17th, 2010 at 07:04pm

InnocentAttraction (100)

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i was going to cry at the speach :'(
i love this its kind of like a curretn day Lovely Bones

March 16th, 2010 at 09:49pm

Hope. (100)

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omg i was going to cry at the graduation :(
evil Mr Robin, was he at the graduation ?

March 16th, 2010 at 06:55pm

Hope. (100)

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i hate that evil Mr Robin :(
grr, please write as soon a possible :)
i love you're writing :)

March 2nd, 2010 at 07:10pm

My Guardian Angel (100)

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Hiya
I absolutely love your story, it is so cool.
Please write more and I will subscribe you because I think the story is so original,
Especially since it is the teacher!!!
Please, Please, please write more!!! :P

March 1st, 2010 at 06:53pm

Hope. (100)

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heelloo
i really do love the story
will MR ROBIN a teacher do mean stuff to her ?
i will subscribe and i have commented
so pleaseee write more :)

March 1st, 2010 at 06:30pm