Nothing Else Matters - Comments

Thank you sooo very much for updating :)
It was verrryyyy good! :D

UPDATE PLEEEASE!
I really like it :3

Updating tonight

Lmao that was funny xD
Yesh, people who do that (cheat, I'm guessing) are quite strange
Update soon please! :D

ill have a update tonight then

I just happened on this while searching peeps works
And I really like it :) like a different, more interesting (in my humble opinion) version of the original Adam and Eve story
I subscibed meaning please update okies? :)

Thank you. I will be sure to update it again very soon.
(As for spelling errors my comp is messing up and not running a spell check)

Well, I liked the update. Again, small mistakes with grammar/spelling, but nothing major.

You use imagary very nicely in this last chapter.

It is just a little romance novel nothing at all serious i just thought about writing it. yes more will be soon to come.

So the idea of the story seems nice. Though you have a handful of grammar and spelling mistakes. Nothing serious.

I'm not sure where you're taking this story, but it seems good, so more soon?