Mibbzworld - Comments

I love this.

This is so freaking cool, Mollzy.
It's a very, very good idea. (:

I really loved the description of the waterfall, and how the Molly character was enjoying it.
Damn, it made me wish I was doing. xD

Your writing is great as usual, and you have great imagery. Legit.
I felt like I was there, longing to go under the waterfall too.
I love it. <3

Really interesting and beautifully written.
Gahh, cliffhanger. xD I wanna know what Mibbzworld looks like!

Aw, I love it! :)

Your descriptions are gorgeous.

This is amazing!
I really like this so far <3 <3

that is beautiful! so fantastical and mysterious, i love it!
the only problem is: i had to copy and paste it into Word, the font is very difficult to read.
but other than that, it's beautiful! definitely subscribing, i'd love to see more.

This is the story I've been giving subtle hints to recently.
In further chapters, it will contain many Mibbians as characters.
Hope you like it. Be sure to let me know what you think of it in comments!

First chapter: 1051 words.