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  • michaelryanpritchard

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    heyheyhey people!! there's a sequel so it's NOT ending here!!!!!
    May 11th, 2010 at 11:14pm
  • MCRisMyHero

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    I agree with baysway!
    May 11th, 2010 at 08:57pm
  • baysway

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    I really liked this, but not as a one-shot. It was the perfect opening chapter for a story. I feel you should rethink this whole one-shot and consider continuing this as a story. You instantly hook the reader, but with no follow-up it seems pointless. Please continue it!
    March 6th, 2010 at 08:44am
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