Moonless Night - Comments

Ooooh what's the VISION?! haha
I really like this story so I can't wait for the next update..
Its cute how Edward and Vierra grew up together, now if only Bella wasn't there.

Keep writing!

its amazingly good

i don't think vierra and jacob should be together,
they don't fit at all.
vierra nad demetri fit, maybe even vierra and edward

jacob is tooo possesive,
vierra seems like the type to dislike posseviness
bella needs to back off she will never be vierra she will never take her place
and
edward needs to be there for vierra, like he promised

its amazing