Car Crash Hearts - Comments

ahhhhhh this is supppa duppa cute and i cnt stand it
.. ;D i love mah use of lyrics

Aww...
Loved this story. :) ♥

i truely loved both of these stories ! :)

AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! <3
i think you truly ended it well.
so cute.

oh, and LOL @
""No need to be abusive with your crapburgers, Gassy." Matt said."
so.funny.<3.

but as for the stories, both of them?
I honestly might not've stuck around 'til this (the end), if i didn't like it that much.
it was amazing. all of it <3.

I personally think that this story is amazing. I think it would be cool to do a sequal with their children.
I know I would read it.

Loved both CCH and Brooklyn. Now I demand that you make a sequel Bitch! No, jk i would never call you a bitch with any sort of negative meaning.

Aww, cute last chapters. :)
If your up for a sequel, I'll read it. If your not, your not. It's all up to you. :)

This was soo good!
I think you should try the sequel :)

Pleaseee update again soon? :)

I say Team Santino. I dont even know why. Normally, I'd be like BARAKAT ALL THE WAY! but it's like Brooklyn knows how it feels to be cheated on, sooo wouldnt she want to keep Nick from it?

I loved it!! xD

i dun liike this one bit!!
i love nick <3
Updateee!

BOLD BROOKLYN !

WOAH O.o
wasnt expecting that..
welll uhm..
UPDATEE

keep going damn it :)

you should most definitely keep it going. and hally might be my favorite character now. :] ilove this.

unlike some, I'm all for Jack, no matter how Nick may seem in this.

&&&&&&& i'd love for the story to go on longer :'D

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. yep, my answer is a bit more of the lovely story Car Crash Hearts to read :D <33

OHOH! and ohdearjesus... I HATE making decisions... offcourse, as i said above, i'm all for jack... so everyone who knows me or ever really talk to, knows i'd pick jack XD; though i can't pick for Brooklyn :P.

Sorry for the somewhat incessant babbling; ive been up all night reading HP, with my computer on and shtuff, and muh email showed a message which lead to this (no sleep) and blahblahblah. theres the babbling again. okay. I'm done. BYE!

Um what about nick? Am i the only one who notice that she just kind of forgot about him?

It seemed that your only errors evident to me were the last letters in some words.
Errors;
I pressed the elevator button and we steppe in.
(missed the 'd' in stepped)

He carried m over to the bed and laid me down, climbing on top of me.
(missed the 'e' in me)

I nodded and presse my lips to his.
(missed the 'd' in pressed)

IF THOSE WERE THE TYPE OF MISTAKES YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT XD.

but overall happy chapter :D. i just hope she really knows what she's doing; id hate to have jack go through the shunning again XP haha... even though the first time was understandable and he did bring that one on himself :P.
I KNOW it's 'just' a story, but y'know. haha <3

poor girl. she got ambushed, by family! D:

:D <33
luffdis ;D