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Ohhh Awesome Story But It Lacks Some things in the Comment department...
Glad To See a Sequal Girly

I can't wait to read more!
LoVE

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I will read this story as I am interested...(It's too late to start now.)
But what threw me off a little was how yu said it was a 'My Chemical Romance Vampire story.' then, 'Frank,Gerard and Mikey.' Uhh...missing two members. What about Ray and Bob. They make MCR too. Without them all it wouldn't be MCR. Are they in it?!

Sorry it's just something that picked at me.

No offence intended.

Hum... no they're not in it, just yet.
Of course without Bob and Ray it wouldn't be My Chem.

HE'S A VAMPIRE NOW!!!!!!!!
wow, once more ur writin has blown me away!!!!
more soon, please!?!?!?!?

I will read this story as I am interested...(It's too late to start now.)
But what threw me off a little was how yu said it was a 'My Chemical Romance Vampire story.' then, 'Frank,Gerard and Mikey.' Uhh...missing two members. What about Ray and Bob. They make MCR too. Without them all it wouldn't be MCR. Are they in it?!

Sorry it's just something that picked at me.

No offence intended.

Love the updates,
I was in complete shock that
a thing started between Frank and Gerard
Love it though
Write more soon!!!!!! :)

Amazing update.
LoVE

Thanks for all your comments they are great!

Yeah 'Her Dark Materials.' i've noticed that, i'll work on it, thanks.

I like this story, though you should work more on your punctuation. Some of your sentences are 4 or 5 lines long.

Poor Frankie!!

I can't believe Gerard did that
glad he's fine now
more soon plz!!!!!!!!

Thank god!
It seems like that update took FOREVER to be posted. =]
LoVE the story.

I'm soo in love wit ur story!!!!!!!
just can't get enough
aww.....brotherly love
write more soon!!!!!!!!

Such amazing writing!
I LOVE it!

love the new layout
but love even more the update
write more very soon!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait to here more.
Loved the update.

Wow, this is really good :mrgreen:
Update soon.

loved it!!!!!!!
yay gabriel and mikey like eachother!!!!!!
......and they admitted it!!!!!!!!
write more soon!!!!!!!!

Loved the update!
<3