Bring It to Your Lips - Comments

i love it! can you update more?

Since I've already commented on everything else, here we go. This is for the last chapter you posted.

I honestly feel that your other pieces of work are tremendously better than this. Although this is nice and fun to read, it just doesn't have that edge to it. The vocabulary and sentence structure isn't quite as good and the dialog could use some help. This seems like a really fun story though. (:

Thanks :) I haven't updated in ages cuz no one's been commenting but comments spark motivation haha

I love this story.
I mostly just love chapter 2's title very funny.

Can't wait to hear more from you
Update ASAP

I hate spiders.
Yuck xP
I loved this chapter.
Major cutenes :)
Update love

Sorry I didn't comment earlier, but I like this story. (:
I also like how you made it in second person. :D

Woohooo!!
Love this.
Can I please be with Dan?
I'll love you forever xD

Teehee Dan is a cutie xP
Love this :)

Lovely dear :)
Update please.