This Loneliness Is Killing Me - Comments

  • rock n roll junkie.

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    awww.
    dude! omg.
    that's crazyyy.
    but i'm glad they're getting back togetherrr.
    but they kind of need to just get married!
    May 15th, 2010 at 10:59pm
  • Shadowfax524

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    Forget that person they obviously don't appreciate the amazingness of your writing and this story. :) Loved the chapter, and I'm super curious to see what happens to them now! =D
    May 15th, 2010 at 04:02pm
  • KaityAnn1986

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    forget about that lost subscriber, the rest of us are still here, Loved the update and how Shaun just showed up and am wondering what lies in store next for them both. Keep up the good work and now I've got to work on the next chapter of my Jack Mitrani story or I'm going to have alot on my mind at work tomorrow, scratch that tomorrow just noticed the time, make that later today.
    May 15th, 2010 at 07:52am
  • rock n roll junkie.

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    sorry i haven't been commenting lately! OMG.
    alison can't do that! but she has every right to i guess and ashley is a whore...just sayingg...
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    UPDATE SOON!?!
    May 15th, 2010 at 12:06am
  • Tennis728

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    nooooooo i need more. im like dying right now, you can't leave me here without more? lol im kinda obsessed with your story it's good.
    May 14th, 2010 at 10:18pm
  • screamingxdreams

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    Five.
    And, what are we playing after Deadmau5?
    May 13th, 2010 at 11:14pm
  • screamingxdreams

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    Four.
    Pants.
    May 13th, 2010 at 11:13pm
  • screamingxdreams

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    Three.
    May 13th, 2010 at 11:13pm
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    May 13th, 2010 at 11:13pm
  • screamingxdreams

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    Shauns a dickfuck.
    Also. one.
    May 13th, 2010 at 11:13pm
  • LendMeYourEyes.x

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    omgshhh as if she walked out on him,but l dont blame her,he deserved it.But please make him beg and let them get back toger,or seriously l'll cry pleeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssseeeeeeee l'm begging you get them back together :) keep up the work
    May 13th, 2010 at 10:45pm
  • Shadowfax524

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    Sorry I didn't comment last chapter I had a massive book report due. I know excuses suck but I'm sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Anyways Shaun's a real asshat. WTF dude seriously doesn't he get it yet?!?!?!? Guess not. Man why do guys have to be so hardheaded. Ok my rant is now over. I really liked both chapters, not necessarily what happened in them, but they were great! =D
    May 13th, 2010 at 10:34pm
  • cinnamonbun08

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    ah! they cant break up! seriously, he needs to tell ashley to leave him alone. who cares if he doesnt want to be mean. he has to man up! poor allison. cant wait for the next chapter!
    May 13th, 2010 at 10:05pm
  • EmilieBennett

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    Hmmm
    Shaun=Ass
    Damn this is crazy! Can't wait for more!! :)
    May 13th, 2010 at 08:11pm
  • bldydrkangl

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    *rounds up the mob and goes knocking on readers doors demanding comments in exchange for not receiving bodily harm* *whaps shaun upside the head for being an idiot* There I feel better now and I can go study for my final. ^_^ I can't wait for the next one to come out.
    May 13th, 2010 at 01:50pm
  • mewtwosangel

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    NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 13th, 2010 at 06:55am
  • KaityAnn1986

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    Girl I thought the general consensus with the commenting was get rid of Ashley, not send Allison off and break off the engagement. Oh well maybe Shaun will wake up and realize what an ass he has been since finding out about the pregnancy and I was suprised at how she told him about it being twins.
    May 13th, 2010 at 06:27am
  • bldydrkangl

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    Does it go without
    sayin that I desperately want to shiv Shaun for doing this to Allison. He needs to stop being an ass and realize how much he is actually hurting her!
    May 12th, 2010 at 02:33pm
  • EmilieBennett

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    Okay just a quick critique..I think you mean Alex in a lot of places where you say Ashley...

    and omg why hasn't she told him about the twins yet!?
    May 11th, 2010 at 05:13am
  • KaityAnn1986

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    Wow, this update was intense. I don't think you should kill Ashley I just think she needs to be out of the picture. Still believe Shaun needs to grow up a little bit, he acts like a jerk towards her now that she is pregnant. P.S. Why has she not told Shaun about having twins, maybe it will help with the Ashley drama.
    May 11th, 2010 at 04:00am