And Then They Tell Me... - Comments

This is very well written. My only complaint is that it all runs together. Try putting an empty line between each line. There were a few typos but not enough to distract from the story. I really enjoyed it. Please keep writing.

Very good story, it is very well written. It is hard, sometimes, to successfully captivate readers with nothing but the opening paragraph but I have to admit that you did very well in that respect. Keep up the great work, it is very well done!

This is really great so far! I like it. Could you put Michael Jackson in the next chapter, please? He's one of my favorite singers. And I have an idea for his part, too - he tries his hand at stepping into the role of a seducer, and succeeds when he tries to tempt Miley Cyrus.

Anyway, keep up your awesome, super-creative writing! :)

lol This story so far is going good, I like the dialogue too, and it's on it's way to becoming something very scandelous.(in a good way)

please update soonnnnn