Baking and Band-Aids - Comments

  • Ooooh shizz I jizzed

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    I almost cried :O The perspective of a little girl was a great idea. I love how everyone had turned to listen to her and her innocence
    November 4th, 2010 at 10:05pm
  • saeglopur

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    THIS WAS SO ADORABLE!
    I love the ignorance of the child, you really captured that so well. I noticed the reoccuring theme of meeting the person again when you're very very old. ;) I really liked this. Nora was a little cutie, and this was so sad.
    August 21st, 2010 at 10:19pm
  • alexander bernadotte

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    Omg, this was so touching and innocent and wonderful <3 I was 15 when my great-grandma died and I sort of took her death like Nora did, not believing that it really happened or acknowledging that she was dead. This was amazing <3
    August 3rd, 2010 at 08:20am
  • sharkbait.

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    I was teary eyes while reading this. It was very, very touching.

    You did a great job. c:
    July 20th, 2010 at 06:08am
  • trecool567

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    I started crying, what a wimp I am xD
    This was so touching, it really was
    -Katie
    July 9th, 2010 at 08:41am
  • Patty Lovell

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    There are tears in my eyes! Seriously.

    This was sooooooo cute! Ugh, I'm glad you're so great at writing, because you seriously have allot of onshots.
    June 29th, 2010 at 07:50am
  • This.Useless.Heart.

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    This was sweet, very moving (got a bit teary eyed like everyone else), and beautifully written. Well done.
    June 18th, 2010 at 01:28am
  • volta.

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    Not gonna lie...I DID have tears in my eyes. :]
    May 28th, 2010 at 10:04am
  • She Said Poptarts

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    Awe. I cried, seriously. When she started talking to her Mom. And then when she moved over to her grandpa and pulled out a band-aid (which was so innocent and adorable).
    It was touching.

    I probably ended up crying more than I should because my grandma had passed away this year.
    That was really cute. (:
    May 18th, 2010 at 08:33pm
  • still a secret

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    This was so adorable! And I had the same reaction as commenter above. I literally got tears in my eyes when she approached her grandfather at the end. Awww. I love Nora's innocence and how she said her grandma was 'hiding.' The only flaw I noticed was that maybe one or two of the words "mommy" wasn't capitalized when it should have been, like if it's used in place of a name.

    Great job on this :D
    May 14th, 2010 at 04:42am
  • Caravaggio

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    Oh my God! That's sooooo touching! I actually started tearing up at the end! Seriously. There's nothing like a child's perspective on life, is there?
    May 6th, 2010 at 01:55am