Revolution - Comments

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GENIUS EM IS A GENIUS.
My heart broke, first for John, then for Grace.
Dammit, Jawnhoe, you should've ran outside after her.
love you, love this.
xo

Absolutely incredible. And I mean absolutely. There was just so much going on between the two of them, I just couldn’t take it. I loved how much detail and emotion was put into this and you could just feel all of it while reading. I loved reading this, end of story. And I was beyond satisfied with the ending because you didn’t end it all like “sucks for them” or “they lived happily ever after”. you gave it a good amount of mystery and hope and made it both happy and sad, y’know. I just loved the characters, especially Grace because she could actually make mistakes. And the way John turned out was great because you can’t help but root for him to want her back. Plus, this looks like you put a good amount of effort into this with two huge chapters. Normally, I hate long chapters, but these were totally worth it. Very, very well done! (:

they were supposed to get back together!! WTF:p

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BUT THEY'RE SUPPOSED TO GET BACK TOGETHER.
GODDAMMIT JOHN.
STOP WITH YOUR WHOLE 'IDGAF SO HARD RIGHT NOW' BS. YOU SO DO, OKAY.

Well, my heart just broke.

Update this again, babygirl.

My goodness this is amazing. I agree with the person above, it's absolutely gut wrenching. You're going to make me a Maine fan with these awesome stories, aren't you? : )

i'd love to read the next part! everything is described so well, it's almost gut-wrenching.