That was an incredible chapter, and I agree with the person above; I want a Dylan!
O.o Wait a minute... love? Did he nearly say that? Oh, wow :)
So Dylan used to be a jerk...? Oh well, I still love him. And I'm still loving the way she has no idea why she has pains in her chest; it's a really clever way of describing her feelings in relation to what she's been through.
Your writing is still amazing, and I can't wait for more!
uh oh. Why do I get the feeling that this Heather's gonna be a bitch??? She better not break up Mika and Dylan... grrr.... anyways, I think I'm done talking to myself. >_< haha sweet chapter!!! Keep it up!!!!