My Best Friend Fell in Love with the Boy at the Rockshow - Comments

We kiss and make-up. And then kiss again. CHEESE!
This chapter was Cheesey(?)
And OMG THEY'RE ENGAGED!
Like, could you update soon?

Who is standing and watching us but Will. I push Gerard away lightly and I try to walk quickly over to Will, but it's too late. He's already gone. I can hear an argument or break up. I can't tell. Maybe both

Poor Carlee...I hate when guys jump to conclusions >.<, anyways please update soon!!!

Awww poor Gerard....I really hope that Carlee and Gerard get back together they were cute, but I do like the Will/Carlee pairing also, anyways please update soon!

thanks everyone :-)

*dies laughing* Great update

Great update

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!!!!

Sweet updates :-)

That update was great, a few mistakes I noticed though:
"What do you think we should do tomorrow, since we have a day st sea?" I ask, already knowing the asnwer

"We should hit the rocl climbing wall first thing in the morning, that is if you want to. I really want to climb it." Will says enthusiastically. I knew he wanted to, he's always been into active oudoorsey kind of stuff.

"Yeah, we totally can. I want to go to the spa too...I really need a massage. After what's been going on, it will be nice to just chillax...you know what I mena?"

It's one of three dining rooms on the ship, and happens to be the one Elliot, Mikey, Bella, and I are assigned to. We look around to find Mikey, Elliot, or Bella.
Corrections:
"What do you think we should do tomorrow, since we have a daysat sea?" I ask, already knowing the asnnswer

"We should hit the roclk climbing wall first thing in the morning, that is if you want to. I really want to climb it." Will says enthusiastically. I knew he wanted to, he's always been into active oudoorsey kind of stuff.

"Yeah, we totally can. I want to go to the spa too...I really need a massage. After what's been going on, it will be nice to just chillax...you know what I menaan?"

It's one of three dining rooms on the ship, and happensed to be the one Elliot, Mikey, Bella, and I are assigned to. We look around to find Mikey, Elliot, or Bella.

Thank God that she's going to be alright...

*lets out held breath* She's Ok. No more Gerard...or my chem I'm guessing *sad face*

Oh my gad...oh my...oh my god. GERARD...oh my god. You better finish the nedxt chapter...I know where you live

OH MY FRENCH TOASTING GOD!

That made me want to cry...poor Gee.

Her and Will would make such a cute couple!
Suddenly, he reaches out and grabs me, kissing me strongly. I push him fiercely away.

"WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?" I ask, angrier than ever. He stares blankly and me.

"You...you pushed me away..." No duh Shirlock! GEE SHE MOVED ON!

Thanks guys! I really appriciate the support!

That was a great update!

Poor Gerard. I guess out storys are going to different directions because you two get married.

i hoped you'd like it