Thieves Among Us - Comments

aalhsflwfnlwhfa you ended on a cliff hanger!!! what happened to harvey???? don't answer that I'll wait for the next update! very very good chapter. I was going to comment and be all constructive-criticism, but I don't have anything to criticize, constructive or otherwise.

I know you updated forever ago, but I suck at Mibba and just now read it. And I must say that I honestly don't think you can do any wrong, and I am so so so eagerly awaiting the next chapter, because I'm in love with this story!

This was a very good chapter, and you surprised me with that plot twist! I liked the character development (thank God you're not one of the authors who pushes two characters together at random times, the timing and everything makes sense), that we saw more of Noah and Clara's past, and I loved loved loved the quote, "and they seemed to melt into each other". I thought that was really brilliant.

This chapter was delightful! I'm so glad you updated! Noah and Clara are adorable. I'm in love with them!

And this. "No one noticed Noah’s glaringly white knuckles as he gripped the steering wheel or the steely indignation in his eyes as Clara was congratulated." AHH. my favourite line, and it was hard to pick one because I loved basically everything about this chapter.

Thank you so much for updating! :D

I loved this chpater, like so so much! I was very sad when it ended and read it reeeeally slow to relish the long chapter.
pleeeease don't teak as long to update because I looove this story!

Oh my goodness, this is amazing!! It's really unique, and I love Clara! Although the circus part threw me for a loop. I couldn't help but laugh that she ran away with intent to join the circus....But honestly, this is great! Please keep up the excellent work :)

oh my gosh that sounds like your dream store hahaha
don't feel iffy about this chapter, I really liked it and it cleared up why the police were at the operating theater and told about all the robber characters

You have me hooked!
:P

VERY good job. keep it up.

Kept my attention. That's saying alot. Keep going pretty pretty please.