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  • Togepenis

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    Awww I loved it!
    June 7th, 2011 at 04:01am
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    Awww. :D!!
    They're sooo adorable!!
    I love how much they're just so in love with each other. It's sooo cute. :D!!!
    Logan is such a cutie :D!!!
    YAY!! they're so amazing! :D!
    January 20th, 2011 at 02:17am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    I loved it!! :)) hunter's happy and logan's happy. What more could we want.
    :( I'm gunna cry because its over and I don't want it to be over.
    Sequals gunna rock my socks. I just know it
    January 19th, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • Write Naked

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    Awe. They're sooo cute:3

    I felt like this was the last chapter as I was reading it.
    January 16th, 2011 at 09:26pm
  • Criala

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    I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    Logan and Hunter are so wonderful together <3
    January 14th, 2011 at 07:07am
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    awww :)
    They're soo adorable! :D!!
    I love them. :D! I love them lots :D!
    January 14th, 2011 at 06:42am
  • Ready Set Love

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    D'aww :3
    They're so adorable!!!!
    I have nothing to say either...
    So update soon :D
    January 14th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • polka dot perfection

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    lovers this:D
    January 14th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    Awww. I love it sooo!! :D this is sooo cute and adorable and sweet and just awwww. :))
    January 13th, 2011 at 11:19pm
  • CeraRachel

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    a.) everytime i see updates for this story, i do a little victory dance.
    b.) such a sweet little chapter, i "aww"ed.
    c.) listening to "god save the queen" while reading will make what you're reading seem epic and uber important.
    d.) weeeeee! i love this story.
    January 13th, 2011 at 11:14pm
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    aww!! i like the last sentence!
    January 3rd, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    Awww!! That was just so adorable
    And No! This was absolutely amazing! There wasn't a whole lot of detail surrounding the entire scene but that's what made it so beautiful because it was more about the emotions that they were trying to convey to the other person that mattered rather than the action itself. And it was definitely brought across. :)
    I love how awkward and adorable Logan can get when he doesn't know how to say something. It's just soo cute!! :D!! And Hunter is just plain adorable. :D!!!
    January 3rd, 2011 at 05:34am
  • SmallWonders

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    AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 3rd, 2011 at 02:13am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    are you serious?! This was GREAT. I can't believe there's only two chapters left. This was great I loved. Logan is soo adorable. I love them both:))
    January 2nd, 2011 at 07:59pm
  • polka dot perfection

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    that was adorable:D
    January 2nd, 2011 at 05:42pm
  • Snowfall Melody

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    Amazing chapter :) It was so sweet, best chapter
    January 2nd, 2011 at 08:24am
  • Hot Chelle Rae

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    I LOVE YOUR STORY! PLZ PLZ UPDATE!!! chapter 28 cant just end with logan i love you! i need more!
    December 21st, 2010 at 06:33am
  • Ready Set Love

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    I felt like that was the end of the story, but I'm so happy you guys didn't end it there
    Soooo.... update soon yeah?
    Good :D
    Ps I love Hunter :)
    December 19th, 2010 at 06:08am
  • aalliinnaaaaa

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    Thank you so much for updating
    December 18th, 2010 at 08:55pm
  • Write Naked

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    I love this so much..
    December 18th, 2010 at 05:37pm
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