Star Squad - Comments

i've never really heard of this before, but it's really good. i only rea the first chapter, but i think you should definitely continuing writing. you have an amazing talent C:

I love Sailor Moon, ever since I was little. I really like your whole idea for this.
I can't say much about the layout, though, sorry. My phone doesn't load it correctly.
I think you should write a longer summary, considering that there isn't one...
I only read the first chapter, but it's not because it was bad; I quite enjoyed this, actually. It was... Cute. How you described who I'm assuming to be the main character, I just loved it. How she has her hair to copy an anime character ^.^
Overall, good job. Really liked it.

I just finished chapter 1 and AWWWWWWW I remember watching Sailor moon your story really brought back memories I can't wait for more :)

I used to watch sailor moon as a kid. ;)

This was interesting, not somethin I would have clicked to read on my own. You execution was nice, I just wish it had some sort of pretty banner.

There was one spot where you had a typo the should have been 'course' instead of 'coarse'. Simple fix.
You definitely have a few good writing bones in you, so keep it up. :)

I totally remember watching Sailor Moon when I was younger. However, I didn’t watch that much of it so I don’t really remember a lot about it. I only remember a few things and a lot of the characters. I guess I should start reading or watching it once again.

Anyway, enough of my ranting. The first chapter, the only chapter that I read, was just cute and funny and overall amazing. However, things did seem a little rushed from time to time, especially when he was explaining how she was a Sailor Soldier and then having her attack the monster. But the flow was the only thing I had a small problem with. Anyway, I think this is an entertaining story and it was fun to read! Great job and good luck!

Well, that was a fun read. :D You're a very good writer, and I enjoyed your style. I did indeed watch Sailor Moon as a kid, so this brought back some memories too. Thank you for that! XD

I really enjoyed Hoshi's sarcasm, that had me giggling. :P His whole personality was very well done. The very end made me smile as well, I can only imagine how awkward that could have been for Mari.

All in all, well done! Keep up the good job. :)

I love the layout and the way you write is amazing and different, I love the way you describe things and the imagery is good. I will subscribe :D

Let me say that I LOVE Sailor Moon, so this is a big plus right off the bat.

Your description paints quite a vivid picture, and I love the chapter length. It's like reading an actual story.

Her confusion and reaction to Hoshi is so real, yet so comical at the same time. I loved it.
The reaction as she takes in all the information about the Star Squad was the same way.

I really enjoyed this so far, and I think I shall subscribe so I can come back and read the other chapters. :3

I like like I told u. I can't wait for the next chap!

i used to watch sailor moon when i was little! i loved that show!! specially mini moon!!! i love it! more please!

SAILOR MOOON!!!! <--- my reaction when I first read the summary.

Layout: Positively CUTE! Very easy to read and all that jazz.

OK, Hoshi = CUTEST INU KUN EVAR! oh my god, he is ADORABLE! <3333 And can I say Mari is just as adorable?? Hahaha, I'm already IN LOVE with this story!! The writing is crystal clear, it's so funny, and the only thing I can add to it would be more details? Other then that, love the characters (especially Hoshi >.<), love the plot, and am SO subscribing!

Such a great idea, I adore Sailor Moon.

XD The ending was priceless! And I absoultely loved her speech. Update soon!

Forever&Always,
<3Rosetta<3

Please update sometime soon. =)

Oh my gosh!!!! i LOVE It! continue! PLEASE!

i love it XD and i love Sora PB XD update soon

Please continue with the story! I love it!

Good story idea! And I love how you wrote it ^_^
I might even subscribe... o_0

Loving it! I've got all the sailor moon dvds at home and my sister just bought me a sailor jupiter keyring. Anyways, please write more soon. =]