I Didn't Believe in God, Until You. - Comments

  • This.Useless.Heart.

    This.Useless.Heart. (115)

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    This is very sweet, and I love your writing in it. I like how you took a very negative experience and slowly evolved it into something positive. I also love the heavy life-changing vibe of it. Also, I normally don't pay much mind to layouts, but I must say I love your layout for this.
    All around good job. :)
    January 1st, 2011 at 02:39am
  • die Bienen Knie

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    Ya, you definatly should win.
    I especially liked the first paragraph and the opening line was amazing.
    The story was sweet and beautiful and a little sad but more so happy.
    You layout was nice and the story was nice and to the point.
    Very good job.
    June 28th, 2010 at 10:59pm
  • Komaki

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    I really like this story. It has this sweet, "I've-changed-and better-off-for-it" feeling. Not to mention it was written very well. The wording was perfect and the details were amazing. I hope you do well in the contest!
    June 20th, 2010 at 07:12pm