Lost in the Vanity - Comments

This was beautiful, you're quite the writer. I'm confident you could get something published someday, if you haven't already.

You're very descriptive, and set scenes and feelings perfectly. I love the way you described everything,
giving things and elegant appeal.

The only objection I have is the tiny font size.

Goodness. So I read your comment and realized that we do indeed have psychic powers!
This was just.. [insertflatteringwordhere]. Yeah. And I had to pull out the dictionary every 5 minutes, haha.

I agree with Alexander Bernadotte, you have mad talent.

Good luck.

Wow. This was gorgeous. That's all I can really say. I'm speechless. O_O
You have mad talent, girl. Great job! You've officially stupefied me x]
Good luck and thanks for entering! <3