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@ SmilingScarlet
I'm not sure anyone has ever liked my point of view specifically, so thank you

You're encouraging me to write again!

The use of words is harsh, and I love it. This is a good break from the fluff I deal with in life, and honestly it just gets me thinking. Also I'm starting to really like your view point. This is real and I love it.

You're loads talented, and I'll keep on repeating this.

Ah, again you charm me with the imagery. I love how well your layout matched the words. It's like the picture in the background is the starting point, and the story takes you on from there. I really, really like it. It had me pulled right into it, and it kept me reading with enthusiasm. I felt like I was really there.

Another great thing about it is that it's all so believable and relatable. We all know what it's like to be checking out somewhere and to have the people just so of brush you off, because they've become so desensitize to what they're doing. And, even if we haven't all witnessed bums, we've all had that moment where we see someone in great need, and everyone just passes them by they're not there.

It was charming in that it was so very cruel, I think. Shows a great love for the city too. The sort of things that people who truly belong in the city will feel nostalgic over.

Do I still have to mention my problem with the grammar? XD

the farther i read the farther i really like how you portray your vocabulary and actions to show your feelings.
The imagery and dedication to detail amazes me into awed silence
I truly appreciate you being able to publish such fascinating and awe-inspiring work
thank you

You have a way of capturing the reader and making them feel as though they were there.
I rather enjoyed reading this.
Excellent job. :D

OHMYLORD!!

This is very good. I love everything, you have an amazing writing style.

You were right! It's very good. :)

I like this, its very good. =))