Do You Remember Me? - Comments

  • alexander bernadotte

    alexander bernadotte (125)

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    I noticed that every character in your one-shots/stories have very, very unusual but very cool names. I like that :D This letter was so sad, though. I was tearing up while reading it. The feelings and emotions definitely shined through. Wonderful job, once again! <3
    July 31st, 2010 at 06:19pm
  • WTFMusicPerson

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    I really like this one I never thought of it like that very creative. It's sorta true, and it describes how people change, and the comparison to someone frozen in time really places good emphasis on that.
    July 23rd, 2010 at 09:48pm
  • Patty Lovell

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    this is so original!
    I really felt it, how much she missed him, and god, it made me so sad.
    June 29th, 2010 at 03:09am
  • AprilJazmine

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    Wow, that was so unique and such a good idea. You described perfectly how very much she missed him, and it was also so strange because, well, she's dead. I loved the letter format, it makes it seem so much more real and raw and passionate, and then you remember she's dead.
    Very well written and very unique and unusual. I liked it a lot (:
    Thank you for entering this into my contest (: the winners will hopefully be posted soon. :]
    June 4th, 2010 at 11:44pm
  • Caravaggio

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    That was a very interesting take. A ghost writing a letter to the living, instead of the other way around. Very nice.

    I have to admit, at the beginning, I was confused. But once I figured out what was going on, I loved it! Like I said, it's such an interesting take on the subject. Something no one ever thinks about.
    June 2nd, 2010 at 07:56pm