Cliff Talk - Comments

Judging has begun. I like the bit about the mythical creatures in the body of water. I didn’t understand. I was confused as to what she was. Was the guy Jasper Hale of Twilight? From my understanding she was a mythical creature as was he. Word choice and grammar were wonderful!

I'm seriously stalking you.

Why hath Jasper left Alice?!
What is this nonsense?!

I like it though, and you're lucky I've become really obsessed with the things you write to actually read Twilight.
I hate Twilight, lmfao.

Wow this is really good.
I don't like twilight but it's good
I hope to read more soon.

Oh Alice.
This was perfect. I mean it.
This is exactly what you've put into the pack and your own writing talent thrown in.
Nothing I've written can compare.

I liked it. I don't even like Twilight and I liked it. It's very well written. :)