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  • Goodbye Gorgeous

    Goodbye Gorgeous (100)

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    I loved how you made it so that the band spoke English improperly.
    I love the plot.

    I hate how it was in Second Person POV.
    And I hate how it isn't a full fledged story!

    You could have done so much more with this!
    July 24th, 2010 at 07:54pm
  • xXletXXmeXXdieXx

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    very good Cass I teared up anyway I knew all of those german words from you guyss using them and just being able to figure it out
    June 30th, 2010 at 07:34am
  • Verloren_in_Kopf

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    omg i luv tokio hotel.........this is a good short story by the way good thing u put the german words at the end or i wud hav ben totally lost!!!! :D
    June 11th, 2010 at 06:06pm
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