Oil and Sea - Comments

I'll do this in english since the story is.. well, in english. Go figure.
O.M.G!!!
I was just browsing through my friends here on Mibba, and I just HAD to look at your stories.
Brings back a whooole lot of memories, these stories. Gah, I couldn't even read this one again, or I'd start crying, for sure.
Oh my god, if you ever delete these stories, you've gotta tell me first. I WANT 'EM!

Anywho.. åumaigååååd! XD

Edit; Oh, hi. It's Alex. Byumz.

this is sooo sad :( ,

it's so well wirtten.

frankie is an ass hole :P

o wow...harsh...god i hate when ppl r idiots like that. all like 'but ur nvr around' so? u still love them and when they r around its like..yay! but no! some ppl rn't vry bright and optimistic like that...

i don't think that is actually love...but thats them...watevr...

okay that was amazing and its a one shot right? prob cuz the first comment was from over a yr ago...lol

but that was sad and evil...gr...mean...g shoulda gave up his job 4 frankie...stupid sea job...but watevr that was amazing and its ur story...i don't listen 2 wat my commenters want, therefore i don't expect u 2 listen 2 wat i want...specialy since this story is done...

but seriousllly...it rocked the boat so hard...that it sank...lol

This is my second comment but I re-read it and I just had a thought about what you said about teh last line of the story. This is just a suggestion but I think the line "And most importantly, and most heartbreaking, you’ll be gone." Would be a good ending. Just a suggestion though.

I really like this..I like everything you write actually. The ending made me really sad though. Especially the hanky...tear. I'm so sad now which really sucks, but that just proves what a great writer you are. You just made my mood do a complete 180.

That was amazing and I think the last line was still fine even if you don't like it. It was really sad too and I thought I was going to cry being the emotional bitch I am = / hah.

that was .... amazing
i cried when i read it though, its really sad

It's soooo sad!!! =[

...fuck..
that's the most beautiful story I've read for ages! I'm even crying, I NEVER cry! fuck that's so sad
but why did it have to end that way? why couldn't Frank just take it all back and then they could live happily ever after! :cry:

Awwww. This made me so sad... I really really loved it. I don't know what else to say. I love the way you described everything, I could really see in my head how mad Gerard was, and how sorry Frank was. And then when Gerard found out Frank was leaving him for a girl... I just felt so bad for Gerard then.

And the last line just perfected everything! I am a sucker for really, really good last lines. And this was amazing!

:)

Oh my gosh.
That actually made me cry. =\\\
It was SO SAD!!!!
You write so well. Seriously. You're amazing.
<333

wow; that was so Terrific!

so so sad..

you made me cry... ='[

x.x.x.

that was effetive. like majorly effective.

;O
That's so ... amazing!
So sad, too =[
That was brilliantly written. Well done!

That was really good.
"very little thing you did made my stomach twist" < It was definately strong love Frank felt.
That was a good way to end it

:cry:

:hug:
:disgust:

:D


This story was so sad
It was just so real written, and you just wrote one of the best one-shots I've ever read.
OMG, but it's so sad

Ooh, fancy story, Tonje.
Even though I can't halp it that I don't like Frerard, this was actually kind of sweet.
Keep up the good work, my love. :]

Tonje:D
æsj jeg kan ikke engelsk x]
stakars andre folk.

men, det var kjeme kjempe bra:D
Og du får ikke ta den bort. for den rulte.
og den var meget trist også.

Du skriver drit bra, sånn at man må lese det ferdig.

nemlig. jeg fant til og med ut hvordan man kommenterte her.

:D heyyy!!

yes i agree.. it is a sad story =/ but i dooooo love it! ^^ so i cant critise you :)

aww poor frankie.. poor gee.. *dries her tears*