Faithful and Adoring - Comments

  • Farce.

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    Judging has begun! The layout is beautiful. I love watching Glee, so this story appealed to me. You used very good grammar. The egg and clean up was perfect!
    June 26th, 2010 at 02:57am
  • falling slowly.

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    I think you used the wrong word...reprieve is a verb that means "cancel or postpone the punishment of" and as a noun it means "a cancellation or postponement of a punishment", so I think the word you wanted to use is "reverie".
    June 16th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • legacy .

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    I think that sums up my feelings of this little ditty.

    I adore Lea and Jonathon, and this one shot was amazing : )
    June 15th, 2010 at 11:07pm
  • lee lee black.

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    Alice, I swear you make me wanna throw away all I've written and just read your stuff over and over again.

    There's so much love - in the writing and between the characters - it surrounds everything.

    I really love your stuff; whether it's about pack things, Glee things, or even the original fiction you so brilliantly create.
    June 15th, 2010 at 05:37am