If I Die Tomorrow - Comments

Awww.... how sad.... i love it!

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I KNEW THAT WAS HOW IT WAS GONNA END!
Super sad....but I loved it at the same time.
It was a good lil story.
But I agree with White Lightening...you are quite the talented little monster...
Good job :D

D: I’m tearing up a little. You, madam, are a monster. An encredibly talented monster… but you keep making be really depressed!

On an amusing note -for me at least- half way through reading the second chapter Guns came on the radio. I was like: ‘they would come on when I’m reading a story by Haily’ cuz when I think of Guns I think of you for some readson… I also think of Axl in tight white shorts, but that’s another story.

I KNEW IT!
I knew Mick liked her! :D It's so cute, but really sad though.
I wanted to cry. Poor Mick. :[ Picturing him crying actually makes me feel like the world's ending. Mick shouldn't cry. He just fucking shouldn't.
Nevertheless, the story was great. I loved it; it was really interesting.
But, if you don't mind me asking, how the hell did she die?
D: Confusing.
Cliffhanger?
Meh.

Touching and unexpected end... despite the title. Great writing once again, wasn't really shocked about that, I know you're a really good writer.
Keep it up dude, you just keep getting better and better!

:)

Aw, Nikki’s so cute ^-^

And playing with the Crue would be completely nerve racking… but completely amazing!

I look forward to the next two chapters :D

Dude
You better update this fast.
I love it.
The concept is really cool, and you have really good diction, which makes it so much easier to visualize.
Keep it up!!!