You Got a Way With the Way You Take Me - Comments

  • Grade.A.Catastrophe

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    omfg! < normally i dont add the f in there lol
    i lovee this story!
    john is soo creepy in it tho :/
    but i loveethe rest of the ppl lol especially alex! mhmmmm
    jack better come around x]
    November 15th, 2010 at 08:21am
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Jack is being an ass. We can't he just understand she had to leave. It's good she told Caitlyn. Update soon please <3
    November 13th, 2010 at 04:52pm
  • SincerelySydni

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    Was the 'she looked at him like a bug who had to be squashed quickly' in chapter 21 a hidden titanic reference xD
    I'm pretty sure the line you used was the exact same line used in the titanic describing how Rose's mother looked at Jack.
    November 11th, 2010 at 07:03am
  • strangers in bars.

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    Lalala, i loved this chapter, because they made up. :3 My life is complete. <3
    November 9th, 2010 at 01:53am
  • Felicia_Selina

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    I couldn't stop smiling when I read the chapter. So happy everything is OK between them. Oh god she's going back....Update soon please <3
    November 8th, 2010 at 05:38pm
  • jordohhh

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    Is he going to confront John?! So good my dear
    November 8th, 2010 at 09:27am
  • Breepocket

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    FINALLY
    woot
    woot
    woot
    happy dance
    ^i believe the above says it all
    November 8th, 2010 at 07:33am
  • flashilyash

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    Oh god.. I just read the last few chapters.. And cried a little bit.
    John should get ran over by a truck, survive--barely--and then get thrown under a bus. And die.
    Now with that very satisfying mental image in mind.. Lol.
    Update soon!
    The suspense is killing me!!
    :))
    November 8th, 2010 at 05:30am
  • alltimedance

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    This story is awesome! Update soon! (:
    November 7th, 2010 at 11:33pm
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I'm not upset.
    But, It could be a good idea to make it where the nurse made a mistake and messed up..
    Say, she has the baby and Alex finally believes her?

    Or no.. lol
    November 7th, 2010 at 02:15am
  • Getlin

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    I'm not upset. I even took the time to comment, that I'm not upset. It was completely understandable. With Alex she might have even kept it, but then she would have had all the support she needed. It was a product of rape and there aren't any proven theories or anything, but rape children always grow up to be some psychopaths so... Might as well.
    Love that you updated so fast and the fact that Alex came to visit her.
    Can't wait for the next one!
    Oooooh and can you do the chapter where she's explaining to Alex in Alex's POV? I know you haven't done it before in this story, but it would be interesting to read his first impression and thoughts of it all.
    Just an idea.
    November 7th, 2010 at 01:54am
  • breakOUT!

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    poor baby. i'm glad alex is back though so she isn't completely miserable i love this so much <3333
    November 6th, 2010 at 11:57pm
  • stay_awake88

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    i knew she was going to get pregnant. hopefully no one ever finds out she got an abortion, because i feel like alex would not like that. cant wait until she finally tells him about john. update soon!
    November 6th, 2010 at 07:27pm
  • strangers in bars.

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    aww.pooorrrrr taylorr. i just can't help but think....maybe there was a different way other than abortion. But, her choice, her baby. STUPID JOHN, I HATE YOU.
    November 6th, 2010 at 03:05pm
  • Felicia_Selina

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    ALEX!!! He's back! :D I agree with Akayytoremember. John is dead. Don't know how, but I'll find a way to kill him!! Poor Taylor, she really needs to talk to Alex about what happened. Update soon please <3
    November 6th, 2010 at 12:55pm
  • Akayytoremember

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    THATS IT!
    JOHN WILL NO LONGER BE IN THIS STORY. BECAUSE HE'S DEAD. THATS RIGHT, I KILLED FICTIONAL JOHN!

    Poor Taylor!:(((( And how ironic, she doesnt hear from Alex in weeks and then he shows up right after her abortion. She needs to talk to him!
    And she needs to tell at least someone about the abortion so she doesnt have to carry it alone :(
    November 6th, 2010 at 07:52am
  • Breepocket

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    SHE HAS TO TELL HIM!!!!!!
    I'm going to be mighty upset until a new chapter comes forth.
    Because she has to tell him so that he can beat John to a bloody pulp and so that they can be together again, happy and carefree because there are supposed to be happy endings when couples are cute.
    POST MORE SOON!!!!!! I DEMAND IT!!!!
    (blame my impatient nature)
    November 6th, 2010 at 06:57am
  • supbaker

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    Alex is so cute (:
    November 6th, 2010 at 06:29am
  • meilishezhe

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    Great i love the ending like f-lies said! Amazing story, but please please please don't have her get pregnant, it would just make everything complicated and called for. You're a very good writer!

    Update please :D
    November 6th, 2010 at 04:57am
  • stay_awake88

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    i really hope nothing happens to taylor because of this that would ruin everything!
    tay and mom moment was nice... now time for tay and alex? please? i want him to kick john's ass!
    November 6th, 2010 at 02:34am