I loved how u described their relationship, short and sweet and to the point. I like how how u had them meet and ended the story in Such a shirt time. It was very good all around:) I also really loved how u hid his death in the first part when u said he didn't say he was abused my his dad. It was very creative. A bit original:) good job:)
and sorry I took so long! I didn't check on it in a while..... :) thanks for joining!